Using the prompts, I have been adding to the story - and even I am surprised by the turns it has taken.
This week’s chapter can be read without background information, but I recommend reading the proceeding parts of this series first. Start with Part 1: Facing Insurmountable Odds. A link for each previous chapter is on my FICTION page. This week's challenge words are listed at the end of this chapter and highlighted in bold in the story.
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As the plane took off, Maria settled back into
her seat and exhaled slowly. Turning to
Mateo, she said, “It was so nice of you to pay for our plane tickets to
Mexico. This is much more comfortable
than the bus ride I just took!”
“I really want to get this whole mess straightened out. A bus would not get us there quickly enough. Maria – I am sorry I judged you so badly. I should never have jumped to such nasty conclusions about you. Ever since I was knee-high to a grasshopper, I have looked up to you. I should have known you would never double-cross our grandparents.”
“It’s okay, Mateo,” Maria said. “We all owe
you an apology for doubting your mental stability! The rift between us
the past few years has bothered me. I
hope we never let that happen again. By
the way – what is up with you and Cynthia? Is there a romantic interest there?”
“Cynthia – what? NO! She is just a detective I hired – not my type
at all! But she was helpful in finding out about the oil company wanting to buy
the farm. Her investigative skills are so good, she seems
practically clairvoyant!”
“I can’t believe all that was happening right
under my nose. The story is so fragmented,
I am still having trouble putting it all together,” said Maria.
‘Maybe it would help to go over it all again,
and be sure we both have drawn the same conclusions,” said Mateo. “Tell me everything you know.”
“Whew – okay. But where to start - -,” Maria
closed her eyes and gathered her thoughts. Then she spoke, uninterrupted by
Mateo until she finished.
“Grandma suggested to Grandpa about a year
ago, that they return to Mexico for a visit.
He exploded, and told her he never wanted her to return, as long as
Pablo was alive. Pablo had been
Grandma’s childhood sweetheart, but their parents had refused to let them
marry, because of a feud between the two families. To separate them, Grandma had been sent to
college in South Dakota.
"While in college, she met Grandpa. His family
was from Mexico, but he had been born in the US and lived there his whole life.
When Grandma graduated, they got married and settled in South Dakota.
"They did return to Mexico when our mother was
small, and lived on the farm for about a decade. Grandpa found life there too mundane, and he was very unhappy. They returned to South
Dakota. Even though they both knew they would never return to Mexico, Grandma
insisted they keep the farm. It had been in her family for many generations,
and she didn’t want to be the one to let it go. It never caused a financial hardship, thanks to the rent money it has generated over the years
and the success of the gravel company our grandparents own. Grandma was so happy when I moved to Mexico
and became the tenant, because someone from our family is finally living there
again.
"Last year Grandpa accused Grandma of wanting to
rekindle her romance with Pablo, but she insists they no longer have feelings for each other. She decided a visit
to Mexico was not worth upsetting Grandpa, so she did not push to make the trip. His accusation seemed odd to her at the time - now she thinks it was just a ruse to keep her from going to Mexico. She thinks
he was concerned that she would find out about the oil company’s interest in
the property from people in the village, if she went back.
"Grandma told me she is even wondering if
Grandpa was asking for papalo just so I would not be in Mexico to meddle with the deal. She said it was very uncharacteristic of him
to believe in herbal remedies.
“But Mateo, this is where I get lost?” Marie
continued, “Why was Grandpa trying to sell the farm without Grandma
knowing? Why now – after all these
years? I really wish Grandpa had not been so out of it from surgery, before we
left – so we could have confronted him about all of this.”
“I have a guess,” said Mateo. "I overheard our grandparents arguing last
year – and it was about a gambling addiction.
I think Grandpa may owe more money than he can pay back. He knows Grandma would never agree to sell
the farm, but once the deal was made, there would be nothing she could do about
it. The huge price offered by an oil
company would cover his debts."
“Thank goodness that Cynthia found out about
the meeting, between the oil company representative and our
grandparent’s financial adviser in Mexico tomorrow,” said Maria. “We can
represent Grandma and inform the company they are wasting their time. They will all get quite a surprise when we inform
them the deed is in Grandma’s name, not Grandpa’s – and that she is adamantly against this sale. I’m not sure how he planned to close the deal without
her signature on the final documents anyway.”
“That still confuses me, too. I am also worried about how Grandpa will pay
off his debts, if this deal does not go through,” said Mateo.
"Something still just doesn’t add up. I think
there is more to this story that we haven’t uncovered yet,” Maria said.
“Hopefully the answer lies in Mexico, and we
will figure it out,” said Mateo. The plane had begun its final descent. They both shed their sweaters, in
anticipation of the blistering heat they would encounter, when they
stepped off the plane.
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This story is totally fictitious and may not contain accurate factual information. I had never even heard of papalo, until I did an Internet search for “indigenous plants of Mexico.”
The Words for Wednesday Challenge supplied the following word prompts:
The Words for Wednesday Challenge supplied the following word prompts:
fragmented, gravel, blistering, mundane, clairvoyant, and grasshopper.
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That Grampa. Sneaky beggar! :) I'm so involved with this story! Wonderfully told!
ReplyDeleteThanks Diane! Grandpa so far hasn't had a voice, but he certainly seems to be in some trouble right now!
DeleteThe twists and turns keep coming! Love this latest chapter - glad that Mateo and Maria have reconciled.
ReplyDeleteMe too! Siblings should be friends!
DeleteI loveabthat you are rockin' this Susan! I wait every week for the next installment!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you find it entertaining Rena. I have loved writing it!
DeleteOh very interesting ...wonder id Grandma is safe in the states :)
ReplyDeleteGood point!
DeletePhew....just under the wire in time for this weeks words. Can't wait to read the next installment.
ReplyDeleteA week away from home at a famiy reunion left me little time to write. Or read blogs, or so much blogging I'm afraid! Hopefully this week's chapter will be posted earlier. I'm excited to see this weeks words!!! I've never written anything that has been this suspenseful for me as the author as this has been! Thanks Delores!
DeleteMore please.
ReplyDeleteAnd it is Wednesday. Woo Hoo.
I will look forward to see how you use the words as well EC!
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